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Solitary Soulless One
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:24:15 AM in AEST
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Solitary soulless one
When most others day is done
You arise to feed
As life from others bleed
Resistance is futile so they say
When they see your hips sway
As they look into your eyes
All self-restraint now dies
Timeless in your existence
Victim of circumstance
Lost forever in the need
To rise with moon and to feed
Beauty beyond the mortal realm
Leaves you captain at the helm
Of this ship that will take
Many a man’s life in its wake
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2005-02-01 11:24:15]
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Re: Solitary Soulless One
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:25:09 AM AEST
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very good vampire write, enjoyed reading
pix xx |
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Re: Solitary Soulless One
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:34:51 AM AEST
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oooo a spine chiller I like it I do I do
huggers
Michelle |
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Re: Solitary Soulless One
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by SimplyMe on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:06:29 PM AEST
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This is my first time reading your work, but first i must say i absoulutely love your name! Anyways what a Vampire write, i enjoyed reading this. Well written, and very well detailed. Loved it! No other way to put it. I'll be looking for more of your work.
~Alucia~ |
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Re: Solitary Soulless One
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:45:31 PM AEST
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| Good write..It worked very well here. |
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Re: Solitary Soulless One
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:15:13 PM AEST
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lol..hey I think I had to jump off that ship but I managed to swim ashore with the help of my friends ;o)
Chilling and oh so well written
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Solitary Soulless One
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 05:49:33 PM AEST
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if i hear something late at night i'll have to look over my shoulder now lol, this is so well written and i love how you ended it:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Solitary Soulless One
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 11:09:46 PM AEST
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| OOOOOOOOOO Pretty neat this was! Christina |
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