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Bitterness
Contributed by
putteragain
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:19:40 AM in AEST
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at last the moon set
upon the frozen sea
like my bitter heart
Copyright ©
putteragain
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2005-02-01 11:19:40]
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Re: Bitterness
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:20:30 AM AEST
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very deep and powerful haiku
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Re: Bitterness
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:48:22 AM AEST
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you do these so well this is great
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Re: Bitterness
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by jillian_phan on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:57:20 AM AEST
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| haiku..... what is the pattern of a haiku if you don't mind me asking..... they alway's leave me thinking, and wanting to finish it off..... it's good theouhg, anything that makes people think is always a hard hit.... |
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Re: Bitterness
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by Arsenic on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:50:04 PM AEST
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A very good write
Always a pleasure to read
Job well done Putter!
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Re: Bitterness
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:41:17 AM AEST
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Ouch. I know this feeling. How hard it is to let go of ! Time and God can heal anything though.
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