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Drowning In My Life
Contributed by
redtempest13
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 02:31:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I can't control my thoughts,
My mind is racing wild,
My heart is beating fierce,
My soul is filled with pain,
I'm crying out in terror,
There's nothing I can do,
I'm just a walking target,
My world is but a knife,
Kill me, I'm begging,
I no longer want to live,
I hurt too much but no one cares,
So leave me alone to die,
I want this to be over,
I can't handle all this pain,
Do this for me now,
Get it over with, I'm pleading,
Please don't let me drown,
In this black abyss I call my life,
I've lost all those I care for,
I've lost my will to fight,
In your eyes i see agreement,
So thank you,
And Goodbye.
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redtempest13
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2005-02-01 02:31:56]
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Re: Drowning In My Life
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 02:39:55 AM AEST
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Very sad but there's peace in the midst of the storm.
Hang tuff, u can do it.
Keep writing cause u have a master talent here.
Hugs, luv, faith, hope, peace, joy,
emy |
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Re: Drowning In My Life
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by Taurusgem1 on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:42:35 AM AEST
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| dark but shows great emotion I love it! |
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Re: Drowning In My Life
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by lostlady38 on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 08:29:34 PM AEST
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| sounds like we are at the same exact place in our lives. if this is how u really feel then know that u are not alone.this is excellent work. u definitely have what it takes to make it in the struggling world of self-expression that others call poetry. i applaud your work. u should stick around and give the world another dose of truth and reality. can't wait to read your next one. |
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