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Left Behind
Contributed by
Taurusgem1
on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:52:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Disastrous pleasures I seek, as you come for me
Graveyard waits,
Cold marble tombstone
My name etched across the front
Towering over the many graves of those
I have loved
I am the last just as in life
Clouds darken the sky
Lighting strikes
But never twice in the same place
My body left helpless wrinkled and withered
An old piece of paper
Rumbled up so many times
You left me and I stayed strong
Why do you not come?
I have everything ready
Tired so tired
Pain would be welcomed
Nothing compares to that of my heart
Ripped from its rightful place
You left me and I stayed strong
Nothing more to look for
The search has ended
My treasures lost with you
Disastrous pleasures, will you come for me?
If not I will come for you
A knife
Blood
I am no longer strong
I am coming for you
Copyright ©
Taurusgem1
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2005-02-01 01:52:02]
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Re: Left Behind
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:56:11 AM AEST
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| I really like this. It's powerful and full of emotion. Great work. |
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Re: Left Behind
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:28:03 AM AEST
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Well I don't like the gory part but I luv the thoughts behind it.
Great writing!
huggs, luv, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Left Behind
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:33:37 AM AEST
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| I thought thiswrite was awsome from start to finish.love the dark and gory parts. |
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Re: Left Behind
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by Katiebird on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 03:55:04 PM AEST
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This is terrific work. |
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