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Split Personality
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:23:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Such a beautiful thing
To throw away
In such a short notice
Today
Days are brightest
With you
Nights are darkest
For you
Nothing I can say
Nothing I can do
Why do you have
To go
Lies are deepest
With you
Truths are shallow
For you
Why do you feel
So Unknown
Being down
Even when your
Not alone
BECOUSE!
You dont know me!
I'm apart of my mind
I'm your third eye
You'r second thought
The part that hates
Even when you do not
Your Jeckle
And I'm Hyde
Or vise verse
We both cry
To bad
I'm the only one
That wants
To die....
Ha ha ha
We'll both die....
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
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2005-02-01 01:23:37]
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Re: Split Personality
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:28:04 AM AEST
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| Interesting write. I liked it. :-) |
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Re: Split Personality
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:35:17 AM AEST
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Very powerfull write!
U remind me of another writer on here but haven't heard from him in a long time 'cause he was very ill.
the reason it reminds me of him is cause of your humor.
His name is Robert Burns2. U might wonna check him out cause he's a very sucessfull writer.
I like the flows here and it's a very wise enlightening write.
thanks for the big ole smile.
hugs,
emy |
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Re: Split Personality
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by autumngreeneyes on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:56:52 AM AEST
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| I'm bi-polar..north and south..why can't we meet in the middle..LOL.. great write..although sad.. |
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Re: Split Personality
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by redtempest13 on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:20:23 AM AEST
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Very interesting...I liked it.
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Re: Split Personality
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:42:13 AM AEST
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Interesting is right to discribe this write.
very well written. |
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Re: Split Personality
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:27:02 PM AEST
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| loved it, loved it, and well i guess i loved it more than that. the only thing i didnt love was the fact you misspelled because and you're. shame, shame, lol =] |
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