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You
Contributed by
tin
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:39:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your every aspect is fantastic at the least
you're godlike beauty in mortal form
your voice is like an orchestra with a soft voice
you're as brite as a solar eclipse but you don't burn the eyes
you're as charming as a siren but you possess only good intentions
You're why i haven't thought of giving up in such a long time
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tin
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2005-02-01 00:39:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:46:30 AM AEST (User
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Oh that's sweet. Any lady would feel good getting such a poem. Nice write! Cheers! |
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Re: You
(User Rating: 1 ) by quill_and_ink on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:47:02 AM AEST (User
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This poem expresses such nice sentiments and truley shows your emotions. |
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Re: You
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:03:41 AM AEST (User
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Such beauty in the soul behind this very touching, tender masterpeice!
it's tops in my eyes.
More please as this one makes all eyes turn face to face with the very pasonate writer.
huggs, smiles, faith, hope,
emy |
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