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The Fire
Contributed by
randomguy
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:31:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The frustration lives,
It burns all inside me.
Fear is my companion,
Darkenss in my soul.
I try to convey,
What I am feeling inside.
All that lives on is pain,
Swelling up a tide,
Alone I hate.
And yet I only have myself to blame,
For what you and I became,
Or for what we never were.
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randomguy
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2005-02-01 00:31:55]
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Re: The Fire
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:54:06 AM AEST
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| The process of self-examination sure isn't easy. My only question would be "fear is my companion" - you might add in a bit more about that fear because it isn't clear where that is coming from. The source of frustration is obvious though. This is a good write. Keep 'em coming! Cheers! |
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Re: The Fire
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by CurtisC on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:55:58 AM AEST
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i know where you're comin from man, great right....
Curtis |
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Re: The Fire
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by quill_and_ink on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:10:35 AM AEST
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| You have given us a personal insight into your emotions and feelings and that is what poetry is about, so well done! |
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Re: The Fire
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 06:16:53 AM AEST
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Jus let your fears rest in the arms of luv.
very moving write.
hugs,
emy |
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Re: The Fire
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by Ambiguity on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 08:46:21 PM AEST
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I'm not really sure I agree with the other comment. The "fear" makes sense to me. I think it sort of explains the whole poem if you ask me. If anything seemed not clear to me, it was the title. I'm not sure I get that - but if it makes sense to you, that's good enough for me.
---Amber--- |
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