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Dancing
Contributed by
Tanmaya
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:21:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Night-songs and a waiting sky,
summer-voices of nearness…
Believe in the promise the
mountains stand for… since ages.
The fading star stole the tears
of yesterday, somewhere far across.
And all those shadows come home
tonight- to light that melts them.
On the shore, the blue waves
laugh again, and the golden sands,
Still shining, call out for dreams
to sail upon their winds again.
Like finding a forgotten song,
that was lost somewhere in the wild,
This is that one moment-
more precious than all the rest of life.
That moment, where hope breathes,
one moment- of endless deep,
Of all the answers long-searched,
of the place where all roads meet.
Reaching out a hand, the quietness of
the sky calls, to where eagles soar,
Let it hold your hand tonight…
leaving the stars etched into your palm.
Let all of time stay captured in
one waltz on the old wooden bridge,
Dancing forever on wind-sailing dreams
and star-etched hands…
Copyright ©
Tanmaya
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2005-02-01 00:21:48]
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Re: Dancing
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:29:59 AM AEST
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A very powerfull, luving, pasonate, hopefull, assuing write.
such beauty-n-power in each luving word.
A masterpeice of joy.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Dancing
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by quill_and_ink on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:12:52 AM AEST
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| Written with beautiful language and imagery. A nice poem! |
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Re: Dancing
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 05:04:19 AM AEST
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Ethereality?
Wistful and eloquent.
Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Dancing
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 09:15:26 PM AEST
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Lovely, inspiring writing. When I came to the last stanza, I had to smile, for it stood out to me as especially powerful, perhaps because it sums up the yearning of the heart so well. Excellent.
Andrew |
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Re: Dancing
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 03:27:03 PM AEST
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I love the lines "The fading star stole the tears
of yesterday".
Masterpiece is correct. This is too good of a poem. Awesome.
Take care.
David |
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