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This Time
Contributed by
iluvpencils
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:01:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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This time, I won't stop the bleeding
I won't hesitate
But I won't go deep
I've stopped cring
I've stopped fearing
***** the world
***** this life
Leave me alone in the dark with my knife
I won't go deep
I won't cry
I won't say a word
As I carry this knife across my life tonight
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iluvpencils
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2005-02-01 00:01:34]
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Re: This Time
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:16:47 AM AEST
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| This is a great honest write, but it's so heartbreaking. Please think thinks through and don't do something irrational. If you ever need to talk about something I'm here. :-) |
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Re: This Time
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by quill_and_ink on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:28:46 AM AEST
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This is truly a very expressive yet dark poem. Just reading it i can feel your pain.
Try not to do anything though, afterall you gotta stay around so you can write poetry:) |
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