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Freedom on the Road
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 10:23:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Who would of thought
that I would be here
right now.
Places only dreamt of
or read about.
There is something
fascinating.....
captivating.....
About being somewhere,
I've never treaded before.
Amazing the adventures
you'll find if you
just step out that door.
I sit here amongst
my road family.
Thinking how glad I
am to be here.
Not to be tethered
to anyone one place.
Never to be stuck in the
same stifling place.
It hasn't been that long ago
since I worked for the Man,
clocking in.....
work my shift....
clocking out,
do it all over again
Yes, I am a nurse
with a wonderful gift....
but freedom is sweeter by far.
I do not miss the weekends worked,
all the holidays too.
I do not miss long hours
away from you.
I am so much happier now.
Actually feeling like I live life.
I'm sitting here in Georgia,
Last week in Alabam'
a week before home in Missouri.
Wow! We get around!
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Re: Freedom on the Road
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by shelby on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 10:25:55 PM AEST
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you captured the foot loose fancy free feeling allover in this poem. I used to be a long haul trucker so I relate to the new places new faces everyday its an awesome feeling thanks for the reminder a great poem!
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Re: Freedom on the Road
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by Ravensfire on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:16:08 AM AEST
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| reminds me of my navy days, travel, new places, people, everything new, great write. |
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Re: Freedom on the Road
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by autumngreeneyes on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:22:47 AM AEST
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| must be nice..seeing new places, new faces.. all that country..the poem gave a nice footloose feelin'..deserves at least a.. ummm I don't vote any more rotllmao..(shhhhh a 5) (looks around..over her shoulder..gives you roses..laughing) |
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Re: Freedom on the Road
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 10:15:44 PM AEST
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oh thats great! how exciting! *take lots of pictures:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Freedom on the Road
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 11:24:23 AM AEST
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I really like this poem, I could really relate to your excitment, and sense of freedom. I had a nurse client years ago, who went on the road as a traveling RN. She and her husband together. Your feelings really come through in this poem, my friend.
Excellant write, and thank you for reading my poems.
Willofree, Terry |
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Re: Freedom on the Road
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:45:50 PM AEST
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Really awesome poem. That sounds really fun to do.
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Re: Freedom on the Road
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 10:37:58 PM AEST
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After I dwell in these old poems of yours, this book o' poems, I think I'm gonna know ya like a book. Fun stuff!
wabl
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