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Truth

Contributed by HobGobby on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 10:09:32 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Everything is dark. Dark and dismal. I can't even breathe sometimes... the scent of death crawls into my brain... corrupting, taking over. Torture... is it really worth it? Never knowing what to do. So much bad all around but I mean what can you do? You can try to run... or hide but what good will that do? I know practically no one deserves to be saved but if you are so selfish that you won't look back, just disappear... you yourself dont deserve salvation. I don't talk without a reason just to let you know.. so it might be beneficial to take it all in.. to see the truth and look beyond the dark corrupt clouds of your life. Just trust me I have no reason to lie to you.. I'm not trying to cause you pain, no drama should come from this. I try to do good, to aid my fellow man. But if no one's listening what's the point? Yet I carry on... speaking to those who deserve it, when I feel it is due. I'm not heartless I just like to tell the truth. Who do you know that does that? All of the people you've trusted, you know they aren't honest. Sometime, somewhere they lied, they've been dishonest and so have you. If you ever trust anyone in your life let it be the first truthfully honest person you've met, let it be me.

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Re: Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 04:22:17 AM AEST
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this would be easier to read if you broke it up into stanzas. even freeverse poems can still be organized into stanzas.

honesty doesn't just consist of telling the truth with words. it's so much more than that.

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