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True Love
Contributed by
HobGobby
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Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 09:58:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You hear my painful cries
you see the fear in my eyes
Time is running out
there's nothing left to talk about
So lets say our goodbyes
before I am binded in these ties
The truth is I always loved you
time to confess, do you love me too?
It's too late...
I'm being dragged into fate!
I reach for you arm
for you can do me no harm
The truth was never spoken
but I took your warm touch as my token
I shall never know of your love
and my soul was set free as if a dove
Copyright ©
HobGobby
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2005-01-31 21:58:00]
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Re: True Love
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by shelby on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 10:09:21 PM AEST
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I liked it start to finish dove adds a nice flair Im not poetry expert so I dont critique anyones work thats not my place. Its always hard to lose someone we care about I hope things work out for ya, ( that is if this is a real life scene anyway) if not you captured heart break nicely
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Re: True Love
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by spazie on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 11:56:56 PM AEST
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WELL I LIKED IT IT WAS PRETTY GOOD CEPT I AGREE WITH YOU ABOUT THE ENEDING
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK |
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Re: True Love
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 04:19:52 AM AEST
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it's bound, not binded.
anyone can do you harm, whether you believe it or not. you should read my poem shine a little softer. |
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Re: True Love
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by Breezy1125 on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 09:08:14 PM AEST
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i'm not the type of person 2 talk about in disagreement or suggest things that shud b changed in the original work of others..i can do nuthin but respect it...and since u're asking fa comments..i loved it...u cudn't have said it better..r wrote it betta....but da way u put it down on dis webpage....POWER-UP.
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Breezy~ |
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