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Oh lord
Contributed by
stonedraider23
on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 09:22:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Oh lord save me
For i am cursed to walk thus world alone
Oh lord be my guide to a better future
Oh lord help me find a true love
Oh lord walk with me
Show me where to find her
Oh lord be with me 'til she is by my side
Oh lord make her well
Oh lord bring us together
I am hurt and alone
Oh lord help me gather the strength to load this gun
Oh lord hold my hand as i pull the trigger
Oh lord help me take this life you so proudly gave me
I want this pain and suffering to end
Oh lord ease my pain
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2005-01-31 21:22:03]
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Re: Oh lord
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by shelby on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 09:30:54 PM AEST
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this made me cry . If you believe in him hang on Im hoping that this is fictional if not please dont do anything like this. Its not much but I can offer you someone to chat with you can pm me anytime
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Re: Oh lord
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 10:59:25 PM AEST
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| Gorgeous write. |
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Re: Oh lord
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by savedbydeath on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 11:01:20 PM AEST
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| i love u,dont talk foolishness,good write |
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Re: Oh lord
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by zaknafein8891 on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 08:26:22 AM AEST
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Great writing but you've got me confused...
when you refer to "her" I'm not shure if you're
refering to an actual being, or if "she" refers to spiritual enlightenment. |
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Re: Oh lord
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by Stonedraider23 on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:23:21 PM AEST
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Thanks for the comments but yea "her" she is the spiritual enlightenment cuz she can help me better and heal my heart "ease the pain"
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