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The Ocean
Contributed by
Bones
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Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 09:01:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Waves crash ashore
Crushing the rocks that surround the sand
Leave nothing the same as before
It makes you forget what’s happening at hand
The sunset makes the sky look so bright
Sinking into the deep blue ocean
Sinking into the waves, dimming the light
Making you feel the best emotion
Copyright ©
Bones
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2005-01-31 21:01:09]
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Re: The Ocean
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by shelby on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 09:17:44 PM AEST
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thanks for ending this day with such a peaceful undertone just what I needed.
Michelle |
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Re: The Ocean
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by O7NeVeS on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 10:27:23 PM AEST
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| How beautiful and serene! I enjoyed it! Thanks for posting!! TD |
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Re: The Ocean
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 10:38:45 PM AEST
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| You're right. I did feel incredibly calm while reading this. Nice work. :-) |
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Re: The Ocean
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 06:47:00 PM AEST
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truely lovely:) hugs n' love nessa
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