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Will you

Contributed by xPureEcstacy_Ashx on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 09:00:45 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Everynight a tear is shed
Everynight a cut is born
You're killing me,
and I cant get you out of my head.
Why cant I be good enough for you....

I look in the mirror filled with disgust,
Beauty is no where to be found.
Shattering the glass,
Lost in a rage
The blood on my arms is for you.

Tearing myself to peices
Unhappy with what I see
Why cant I be good enough
Why cant you love me back
Your all I ever want
Your all I ever need
Please just let us be.

I never thought anyone could be so perfect,
till you stepped through that door.
I feel face flat into you,
and you tore straight into my heart

Now your all I ever think about
Your all I ever breathe
the thought of you is killing me
Will you ever love me back

Twisting and turning
Stretching and pulling
Will I ever be good enough for you
Will you ever loce me back

You the only thing I love
Yet you fill me with so much pain,
and so much regret
The dull blades running acrooss my arm,
Is all for you....

Slamming my fists against the bathroom floor
Without you I have no future
Without you there is no reason
Without you I lose my breath
Without you I lose my mind
So baby dont be surprised,
I did it all for you...

Copyright © xPureEcstacy_Ashx ... [ 2005-01-31 21:00:45]
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Re: Will you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:51:45 AM AEST
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Wow...Intense write. I really liked it though. I can relate to it on a certain level. Nice work. Keep writing.

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