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Purely Demonic
Contributed by
bonita2689
on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 08:00:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I'm so pure
its sinful
the slightest gaze in my direction
will leave your eyes burning with lust
perfection at it's finest
and darkest
let me show you
fall under my wing
and I will teach you the ways
of the wicked
your eyes they flicker
stand strong?
how dare you...
succumb to all that you desire
your weakness shows
you can not hide
fall slave to your selfish pride
it makes you beautiful
did not you know?
it makes you the same
easier to manipulate
do not be afraid
I am with you
until, that is
I kill you
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bonita2689
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2005-01-31 20:00:21]
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Re: Purely Demonic
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 08:49:15 PM AEST
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| whoa crazy twist at the end.... good write though, I enjoyed it. |
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Re: Purely Demonic
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by shelby on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 09:07:32 PM AEST
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I wasn't expecting the sudden turn at the end I like it! Flowed well deep dark and YEAH!
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Re: Purely Demonic
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by Fafnir on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 02:43:48 AM AEST
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| Good poem! I enjoyed reading it. Its dark and lovely... just the way I like poems to be =) |
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