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my tears fall...
Contributed by
morgana
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Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 06:59:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My tears fall
One by one
Will they ever end?
Will my pain ever mend?
Shackled in a cold room
My soul cries
For light of sun or moon
I try to scream
But nothing comes out
Where am I ?
Is this hell?
My tears fall
One by one
I’m feel myself giving up
All hope is gone
I know I’m to rot here
Alone, shamed
This is my fate
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morgana
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2005-01-31 18:59:21]
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Re: my tears fall...
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by afterdark on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 07:07:15 PM AEST
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| Very strong write..The feeling here was very good..Keep it up. |
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Re: my tears fall...
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by emystar on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 07:11:00 PM AEST
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Very strong write! Awesomely wise.
hugs,
emy |
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Re: my tears fall...
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by jthzero on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 07:12:59 PM AEST
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very dark but has a lot of feeling in it
better than some of mine:) |
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