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My Dreams
Contributed by
deablo
on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 05:58:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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What do I see?
From when I wake
To when I sleep
My dreams are filled with
DEATH!
Not death of just anyone
But my death
At any place
At any time
My mind thinks about
My death
I cannot help it
My mind is too strong
The graphics are horrendous
The voices that are their
Will not stop
They say kill yourself
Kill yourself
There I am, all alone,
Cleaning my gun
For the last time
Nice and clean
Ready for use
Taking a bullet
Placing it in the chamber
Locked in place
Ready to fire
Safety off
Placing the ¼ inch bare
In between the trigger and trigger guard
Wrapping my hands around the barrel
Placing my lips around the end
Hear those voices
Kill yourself, kill yourself
Your life sucks
Nothing to look for
Your best friend is dead
Can’t get a girl
Why waste time
For something that won’t happen?
Just kill yourself
Then all your problems
Will end
Sitting on the edge
Of my bed
Placing my feet on the bare
Count down
To the end
Of my life
Three
Why waste time?
Things will not be good for me
Two
Dark clouds above my house
People laughing at me
Voices
Kill yourself, we’re waiting
One
Pushing on the bare
Bullet shoots out
Penetrates
Blows out my brains
Blood and brains
All over the wall
That’s what I see
From time I wake
To time I sleep.
By Adam Pomerleau
Copyright ©
deablo
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2005-01-31 17:58:17]
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Re: My Dreams
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by bonita2689 on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 08:08:05 PM AEST
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| I must admit such scenarios that have happened to me havent been as graphic but I will share with you that you are not alone. I've seen myself dying, seen myself killing myself many times. Razor, pills...I do not know why it seems we have such horrendous thoughts for I too used to hear those same voices and they whispered the same evil fate into my ears, "Kill yourself, you are worth nothing!" My only piece of advice is, if it keeps continuing, tell someone. Or otherwise it may become to strong and you might act on your dreams... Lovely yet morbid write. Keep them coming! |
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Re: My Dreams
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by Mandy2007 on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 10:28:51 PM AEST
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| WOW! that actually sent a child down my spine! i could actually see that in my head as i read it, great job! keep up the writing, and just don't let those voices get to you! |
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