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My Deadly Fate
Contributed by
EVERxSOxSWEET
on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 05:17:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Every second im drowning more,
Trying so hard to touch the shore.
Realizing at once my greatest fear,
Im yelling and screaming, But who will hear?
Im searching for someone to help me get away
But my searching comes up empty after each day.
Im sending my soul to the sky
Begging, pleading, i dont want to die!
This struggle is turning into a war,
It seems like i've gone through this too much before.
Still im screaming, this isnt fair!
Im sinking farther into nowhere.
Nothing is going like i planned,
I want a solid ground on which i can firmly stand.
I hate how im lost, and i cant be found,
No matter how much i look around.
Please, someone, i cant see anymore light..
All that once glowed now looks like night.
But now im gone and its too late
I couldn'e escape my dreadful fate.
Copyright ©
EVERxSOxSWEET
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2005-01-31 17:17:53]
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Re: My Deadly Fate
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 06:19:33 PM AEST
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this is sad, beautiful, and essensial all in one, the
flow is captivating, beautiful style, and definately a
a voice of longing, worth hearing . . .
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Re: My Deadly Fate
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by CAUGHTinAdream on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 09:12:10 PM AEST
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Great poem Kay, I really liked it. Especially these lines..
This struggle is turning into a war,
It seems like i've gone through this too much before
and..
Realizing at once my greatest fear,
Im yelling and screaming, But who will hear?
Im searching for someone to help me get away
But my searching comes up empty after each day.
Good Job keep it up! love ya!
`Kristen |
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Re: My Deadly Fate
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 09:28:23 PM AEST
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Wow, this seems new for you, I dunno why, but it does...It was great by the way...Really good, I like how you seem so versatile with you writing...keep it up
Mason |
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