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XVI
Contributed by
savingmarion
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Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 05:14:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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These cuts, they do itch
It is more from annoyance,
That I feel regret
Copyright ©
savingmarion
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2005-01-31 17:14:53]
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Re: XVI
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 06:39:12 AM AEST
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Interesting that you have utilised roman numerals for the title. 16?
16 cuts?
For some reason, I feel, that this is a "cutter's" poem... all apologies, due to my (perhaps) misinterpretation and generalisation... Merely pondering the meaning behind your gentle words. You are far from cliche, and your puns appear to be no coincidence.
I have much appreciation for your work.
A powerful Haiku.
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Re: XVI
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by FreedomRock on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 11:48:19 PM AEST
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don't do anything stupid
life goes on...trust me! |
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