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I promise
Contributed by
dragonluvsong
on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 04:44:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I am shackled to the wall.
Promise my eternal prison.
Drowning in my sea of tears,
Within your heart is my torture chamber.
Hanging by a thread,
My sanity so far,
Only sorrow to rule my battered will.
I long to be set free,
To soar through the clouds,
To travel to the ends of the earth,
...And get away from you.
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dragonluvsong
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2005-01-31 16:44:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I promise
(User Rating: 1 ) by dark_descent on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 05:02:08 PM AEST (User
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Commitment can be both a curse and a blessing.
The sense of entrapment in this poem is very powerful and dark. Very impressive write. |
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Re: I promise
(User Rating: 1 ) by oxluvlaughingxo on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 06:13:28 PM AEST (User
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very strong and emotional. great. keep it up. |
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