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Hope
Contributed by
Kalyle
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Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 04:25:01 PM in AEST
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Tired of living in this hell of a place
Wish my life would end at a faster pace
So that I may one day end up in a better place.
Closer to God if I may I hope.
Guns blazing and swords continuously clashing
Such innocent souls killed ever so cold bloodedly.
Now! I am tired of seeing parents crying over lost children.
For we can only pray that they can go to the ever living
Copyright ©
Kalyle
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2005-01-31 16:25:01]
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Re: Hope
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by hellsfallenangel on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 04:52:42 PM AEST
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i like it, it is very moving well keep it up bye
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Re: Hope
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:44:50 AM AEST
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very beautiful poem, touches the heart with gentle
compassion . . .
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