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the day
Contributed by
karmen
on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 04:22:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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What if tomorrow,
we all wake up,
and everything we’ve ever known is gone?
No more buildings every where,
supplying us with out every need.
Would the world survive?
Would you even survive?
Sometimes we all just want,
everything to be gone,
because of maybe a heart break,
or a death.
Can’t do that anymore,
because you never know,
when the day will come.
The day everything's gone,
and we finally are left.
The day we’re left with nothing,
no more fast food places to run to,
and no more malls to depend on.
Just each other.
Take the heart breaks as points in life,
that will just make you stronger.
And take the deaths,
knowing there going some where,
much happier and better then here.
Don’t close your eyes,
don’t let life pass you by,
no matter, good or bad points.
They’ll al just make you stronger.
Live life.
Don’t just let it all pass you by.
Copyright ©
karmen
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2005-01-31 16:22:18]
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Re: the day
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by dark_descent on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 04:34:18 PM AEST
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| it contains some very strong ideas about life and makes one think about ones own life. good write, keep it up! |
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Re: the day
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by jillian_phan on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 04:45:16 PM AEST
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| i like it, i thought no one knew that,, but i guess i was wrong. very inspirational and point taken |
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Re: the day
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by hellsfallenangel on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 09:05:21 PM AEST
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i love it. it true very good wright bye
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