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Batteries Died
Contributed by
raven
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Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 03:42:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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It started a warm night. The best part of my life. A flood of happiness I swam in always. Riding a rainbow rollercoaster. The happy times, the great ones, the moments I wont forget. Your my air to breathe, my greatest pleasure.
It ended a night of frost. The greatest pain of my life. The river went dry and my heart shriveled. The end of the rainbow was not a pot of gold but rather I found the darkest cold. The times, the ones, the moments I wish to forget. Your the lack of air that suffocates me, my greatest curse.
Game Over, its not that easy to hit Continue now is it?
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2005-01-31 15:42:01]
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Re: Batteries Died
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by dark_descent on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 04:16:16 PM AEST
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| you have a very individual style of writing. I like this a lot, its very raw and emotional. keep up the good work! |
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Re: Batteries Died
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by Fears on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 06:12:30 PM AEST
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wow, that was realllly good! I loved the way you put it to an end..verry emo and verry true in the way you put the words..greatly unique!
~Fears~~ |
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