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Sound of the UnheardVoice
Contributed by
raven
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Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 03:38:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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:A POEM OF THANKS:
In the darkness I once resided. I dreaded there being no hope but then you came like a new flower in the spring. You found me at my worst and taught me to smile again. I cant thank you enough. You brought me a life jacket to swim from the sea of sorrows.
I was like a weeping willow without sunlight but you brightened my days with your rays of hope. I was trapped under water and you brought air to fill my lungs. I escaped this maze of horrors because of you, my map.
You are like reinforcements to my war, I can finally burn the white flag, my heart beats again... It beats the sweetest sound again because of you. I was truly lost and you led me home.
when it rains on you let me be your umbrella, thank you!
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Re: Sound of the UnheardVoice
(User Rating: 1 ) by jillian_phan on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 04:42:11 PM AEST (User
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i like your metaphors,
You brought me a life jacket to swim from the sea of sorrows.
I was like a weeping willow without sunlight but you brightened my days with your rays of hope.
muah bravo
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