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Shadow War
Contributed by
Phantomdream
on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 01:24:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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One hundred thousand whistling arrows,
raining down like night's lonely fire,
piercing the perfection of the silence.
Raindrops of blood,
spattering guilt on greedy men's faces,
consuming them in betrayel.
Tears of crimson,
spilling on the vast glassy dream,
destroying the hopes of men,
and bringing us to the impossible shodow war.
Copyright ©
Phantomdream
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2005-01-31 13:24:13]
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Re: Shadow War
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by Syloss on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 01:33:53 PM AEST
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I don't know what to say other than I like it.
-James- |
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Re: Shadow War
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 02:16:59 PM AEST
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| Pleasant little read, isn't it? (Yes, I'm being sarcastic) Nice write...good images. |
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Re: Shadow War
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:49:18 PM AEST
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| Intense write. I liked it. |
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Re: Shadow War
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by Rhymingron on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 06:59:43 AM AEST
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| Very well put. I hope you will read my, War No More." |
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