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Insomnias Guest
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 12:58:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Time now is 6.24am,
I am awake & depressed once again,
Eyes won’t sleep, mind wont rest.
It seems I’ve been chosen as insomnias guest.
I have no choice I am its slave,
Inside my head it has found an un-restful grave,
Burrowing inside deeper & deeper,
Under its powers I become ever weaker.
Insomnia speaks & I answer,
To its music I am its dancer,
I am alone as I move across the floor,
I am only fit to be insomnias whore.
An invitation to me it’s addressed,
Over my soul has insomnia caressed,
Speaking silently only to me,
Making its promise it can render me free.
I listen & take it all in,
Inside my thoughts I feel insomnias last sin,
Probing & delving deeper it goes,
All through my veins the restlessness grows.
I pray for nothing but sleep,
Nothing but into my head demons creep,
It seems that I’m a bearer of such a gift,
A present insomnia won’t let me shift.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-01-31 12:58:37]
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Re: Insomnias Guest
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 01:05:53 PM AEST
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I am a fellow guest - can't ever seem to leave the party -
I'll be thinking of you as I miss my own dreams....
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Re: Insomnias Guest
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 01:21:11 PM AEST
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I am alone as I move across the floor,
I am only fit to be insomnias whore.
I love this line..but when's the last time it paid you..LOL
great write as usual.. |
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Re: Insomnias Guest
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by Syloss on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 01:29:22 PM AEST
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| They say sleep deprivation helps put you into an altered state of mind. All it does to me is make me cranky. Don't you hate it when you can't sleep all night but as soon as the alarm goes off you fall asleep? |
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Re: Insomnias Guest
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 01:32:43 PM AEST
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Oh, I can relate to this soooo much.
I too, don't sleep very well.
I understand hun.
Good write,
*huggies* Phil xxx
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Re: Insomnias Guest
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 01:39:13 PM AEST
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ahhhh!! very well thought out!
Amazing job on this! |
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Re: Insomnias Guest
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 01:53:28 PM AEST
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I feel the same way at times..... you are quite poet.... you captured the feeling of being an insomnaic so very well....
Insomnia speaks & I answer,
To its music I am its dancer,
I am alone as I move across the floor,
I am only fit to be insomnias whore.
I loved this verse so much.. Awesome awesome poem!! |
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Re: Insomnias Guest
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 02:07:56 PM AEST
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I hear you there.I can relate to that.well done pixie.
hugs |
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Re: Insomnias Guest
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 02:42:51 PM AEST
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The truth the lies in this write was awesome;
I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this problem too.
Great write Kriss i enjoyed reading this poem.
Jane x |
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Re: Insomnias Guest
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 06:27:46 PM AEST
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a clever and lovely peice of writting pixie, u r an artist and sleepness come with the territory, not 2
mention insanity, lol, have i left anythig out? . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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