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THRILL
Contributed by
jillian_phan
on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 12:35:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You know it's to come
You can see it in your eyes
You take the chance
Not knowing if you'll die
You take a deep breath
Slightly closing your eye's
Not knowing if you'll wake up
In a hospital or die.
Racing for the thrill
Not knowing if you'll kill
The only thing racing,
Is your heart and your will.
You drive with speed
There's no way
You can go too fast,
But one slight move
There's no reaction,
But a crash.
People sit and wait,
But it's too late.
Your actions have won
And your answer's
Are too late.
If putting your life in danger,
Is the cause of your thrill,
Then go and have fun,
But think twice,
Because it can kill.
Dedicated to: Michael Yousko
Copyright ©
jillian_phan
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2005-01-31 12:35:22]
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Re: THRILL
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by Raven on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 09:56:03 PM AEST
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| that was really good. best wishes. |
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Re: THRILL
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by Fears on
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| wow...i got shivers...really good, I love it!! |
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