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Canyon of the Soul
Contributed by
zaknafein8891
on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 12:03:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I'm nothing, a failure, I
can't do anything right. Its
all this stress, I bear
the world's weight, can't concentrate,
all this bottled up hate.
I just want to live
my life, but that tempting
knife is calling my name.
The rising pain, it's driving
me insane. Can't you see?
There's no place like home,
Yea right! I'm always alone.
Save your sympathy, can't you
understand? All I wants to
be free from this agony,
its building inside. I feel
Incomplete this hole in my
soul, no piece to complete
me. sometimes I'd rather
be dead. Angry voices screaming
in my head, they said,
"Your nothing, a failure, you
can't do anything right. you
don't have to fight it,
just write..."
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2005-01-31 12:03:28]
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Re: Canyon of the Soul
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 02:02:38 PM AEST
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| Very much like what I was feeling earlier, cutting myself with my words. Yeah, write it all is a start. Then, when it's habit you can start being selective. That's how I started (although sometimes things leak out onto the page I don't mean to be there). I hope it helps and I hope you fall in love with writing. Blessings. J. |
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Re: Canyon of the Soul
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 05:26:52 PM AEST
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What Timebot said.
Canyons are formed by ancient rivers - in this case, unconscious ones . . . archetypes? I'm musing here, and that's a good thing. Your poem made me.
Keep writing. It helps. |
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Re: Canyon of the Soul
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by Whisper on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 08:38:20 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this. I remember when I felt just as you do. Really .. Have a stiff uppper lip Mon
All will get brighter
Keep the faith
Whisper |
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