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His trying for causes lost

Contributed by christopherscool on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 10:50:36 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Why he is alone when company is with she
Could it be he is something he is not
That cannot be for he stole her from him
Will he stand for his attempts to reach her again

If they didn't work for three years there after
It shall never, why shall his faith sustain
At times he can't stand to trust her
At times he can't help but love her

Hope that all shall work towards the end
Even if its to be him without her
Subconciously used his heart
Just like the rest of them, she made it true

So much history of hers he does so hate
With ever lonely bone in his his body
He wonders how he could truly love someone
With whom trust is so lacking

Will he ever find himself when consumed is his mind
On how time with her is needed alone
So determine will he if saved are they
Or saved if she from the live before her home

At their old work he does recall times of laughter
She then states how they could never be
Proved this does, things they seem are never not
Affraid is he for this to be true for them, not she

If facts this simple could be changes with simple time
Time of parting could show them back together
In finding her feelings for the first of them
Shall prove the usage of him like ones from his past

What to think at this point does he wonder
When day by day the other she still talks with
And being first to see in the morning to her is he
'Enough!' he cries knowing now of her lieing heart

Copyright © christopherscool ... [ 2005-01-31 10:50:36]
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Re: His trying for causes lost (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 05:56:03 PM AEST
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very well written, i can hear the tune:) hugs n' love nessa

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