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who will miss me?
Contributed by
blazer
on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 08:52:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I've fallen...
Like elms to golden dust of autumn wind
Gentle, light
I fade
Now the reds, golds and violets
Of sun and sea be,
I wither....
Who will miss me?
The flush of rose gone
A sappling always I,
Tolling faint among the echoes,
Needing more dew, more sunlight
To grow to beauty
Hungering for beauty.
Now I return to sprinkled ash.
I lay barefoot before sunset,
Cozy darkness dims my sight
I long to taste my mothers breast...
Who will tell my frozen words?
Who will miss me?
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blazer
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2005-01-31 08:52:24]
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Re: who will miss me?
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by jillian_phan on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 12:13:13 PM AEST
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| it's really good, i feel like it is missing something, but really deep |
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Re: who will miss me?
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 02:57:32 PM AEST
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| this is beautiful... it's not missing a thing. |
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