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The Unopened Rose
Contributed by
_volcom
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Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 08:51:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The unopened flower.
Like an Unopened flower, the loveliness is within.
We know that beauty is on the out but the real treasure is inside.
Skin is stranded to bone.
Some made to appel some made to protect.
Yours is both.
Like an unopened flower the beauty is there but under the skin is where the sweet soul is protected.
The goodness is kept within, the skin and bone.
A soul is there forever.
No matter the shape of the outside.
A flower will grow old wither and die but the memories of what is inside that unopened flower is what will last.
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Re: The Unopened Rose
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by blazer on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 08:56:16 AM AEST
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| very nice. |
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Re: The Unopened Rose
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 11:37:50 AM AEST
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| beautiful, beautiful tribute... |
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Re: The Unopened Rose
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by Phantomdream on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 01:29:06 PM AEST
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| This is very sweet and touching. Keep it up! |
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Re: The Unopened Rose
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 08:51:04 PM AEST
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| very true, great write |
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