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inertia
Contributed by
marshmalloska
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Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 04:43:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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stop and still
take a moment if you will
why not try to comprehend
what lies beyond infinities end
perhaps the paradise of your dreams
where hope is light, and surroundings gleam
whatever it is that you might find
imagination paradigm of your mind
take care not to venture further
for you tread upon my hearts inertia
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Re: inertia
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by spazie on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 05:01:54 AM AEST
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| I LIKE IT IT IS VERY GOOD BUT HEY WHAT DO I KNOW I AM JUST A 15 YEAROLD TEEN THAT GETS THE URGE TO RIGHT POETRY NOW AND THEN ANYWAY IT WAS GREAT |
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Re: inertia
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by emystar on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 05:18:49 AM AEST
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very good write. a masterpeice of beauty in the rest form.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: inertia
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 06:02:30 AM AEST
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Very lovely....Welcome to YPDC.
Jenni |
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Re: inertia
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by marshmalloska on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 06:03:38 AM AEST
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| well im just seventeen year old who likes to write poetry every now and again, buti value your opinion. Being 15 doesnt make you any less intelligent, thankyou =) |
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Re: inertia
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by sandysandysandy on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 06:56:52 AM AEST
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| wow. I like how you use words. You take us on a little journey each time. picturing as we read.. thanks.. good write. |
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