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Doubt-- The Brain Teaser

Contributed by Elisabeth on Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Seducing your mind
So hard to find a way out
Trapped; never to depart
He cheated your game, so what's next
Your signal not enough
He would not grasp
A tear-jerking testimony
Dwelling upon this feeling
Your rights have withdrawn
A plastic truth so sore
He left your bloodstained soul
To rot inside his hell
What, oh what, to do
But let his ego swell
Craving your mentality
Taken from reality
With you- he is living it big
Once in the spotlight, now what's next
A silver truth so whole
He left your bloodstained soul
To rot inside his cell
What, oh what, to do
But let his ego swell
The truth concludes to this:
He's a backsliding indignity
With desires from hell, a sperm let loose into weakened minds
Unworthily, he comes to your horny depressions
This gloom sucking fool
Wants you to join a black hole party
Their tasteless jokes leave the best hangover
Decisions to be made
Are you in or out
Be your own person
And destroy the doubt

Copyright © Elisabeth ... [ 2002-12-08 06:00:00]
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Re: Doubt-- The Brain Teaser (User Rating: 1 )
by Jule on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 05:30:08 PM AEST
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this sounds like something i've been trying to tell a friend of mine for a long time. great job!

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