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Underneath the seal
Contributed by
LevyMetal
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Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 08:13:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Red rum, Red rum
Goes down so smooth until im strung
Derranged in two by evils inside
I think I should have ignored that voice in the back of my mind.
It dont play nice, it wont be fair
When its gone even you wont be here
Kill em all, its under way
Beneath the frozen surface and above hells gates
Red rum, red rum
Fed your purpose now i think im done
Every time you kiss me i die a little more
In liquid spirits the fear comes to be the Lord
Wrinkles scurry to hide your fear of living
It summons you to fight and hate
Moonshine burns, red rum murders
I dont think i like the feeling it creates
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2005-01-30 20:13:50]
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Re: Underneath the seal
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by quill_and_ink on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 09:05:02 PM AEST
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| Well written, deep thoughts of an alcoholic(i hope that what its about). A good poem:) |
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Re: Underneath the seal
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 11:05:18 AM AEST
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The title was intriguing. I had no clue what would be waiting on me.
From the first sentence on I saw an image of Jack Nicholson all disarrayed and manic.
Into the depths of sheer hell is what I viewed...
And, I liked it..
Kie |
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