|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Behind blue eyes
Contributed by
noone
on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 06:13:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
|
Darkness begins to close in on me while I sit and pray,
Pray that I were someone else just for one day.
You don’t realise that your mean words affect me in this way.
And now the secret has gone astray.
But it is too late.
To change what you did.
My body lies motionless.
Blood gathers in all corners of the bathroom.
Your beautiful walls I always clean are now covered in my red poison.
A shiny light catches your eye.
You look down and pick up the blade,
Oh now you begin to cry!
Why didn’t you cry before I died?
It had to come to this to make you care.
When life got so hard for me, too much I couldn’t bear.
Well now I must go, I can’t stay and watch.
My soul floats towards the ceiling where I hear real laughs of joy,
With one last look, I feel a tinge of sadness creep into my mind.
But my dreams are calling, I truly must go.
So this is the end, you will never know, what really goes on, behind blue eyes,
So goodbye goodbye.
Copyright ©
noone
... [
2005-01-30 18:13:24]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Behind blue eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by TheNextRobertFrost on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 08:43:55 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| very beatiful. |
|
|
Re: Behind blue eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 06:13:43 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
It's very sad but written well.
Life is a mystery but it's till worth the living.
I get discouraged and angry but some how by god's grace i make it.
No matter how discouraged i get god gets me thru. I know i don't live up to the worlds expectations but thank God I finally understand what luv is and now I want trade it for the world.
hugs,
emy
|
|
|
Re: Behind blue eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by shadowed_soul on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:49:22 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I love this poem. Reminds me of the song, lol. I know who its about and therefore think it is sometimes relevant. It is very moving and sad. Could bring a tear to anyones eye.
Melissa xx |
|
|
Re: Behind blue eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 07:12:35 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Sad write. But I liked it. Great work. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
