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Checkmate
Contributed by
jthzero
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Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 06:12:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Calling all your abilities it takes to play this game
Hollow become the loser for they become the tamed
Every move moving against your fate
Calling all your minds power to speak your enemy's mate
Kings you are of the ancient battle field of time
More the victories you earn the stronger you become in the mind
All of your power is in the pieces you hold in hand
Together you will turn the field to which only one will stand
Eventually when the last piece falls, the true king holds dominion over all
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jthzero
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2005-01-30 18:12:46]
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Re: Checkmate
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by noone on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 06:16:23 PM AEST
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I really liked this! Its very original, and well written. Good work, keep writing!
Kirsty xx |
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Re: Checkmate
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 08:45:40 PM AEST
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| Cool write. I wish I knew how to play chess... |
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Re: Checkmate
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by SimplyMe on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 09:28:14 PM AEST
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| Lol i loved this! It is very unique and well written. You must really love Chess to write about it. None the less it is still a great write. I also second the last comment. Truely wish i could play Chess my dad plays all the time, even wins money from it ^_^ |
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Re: Checkmate
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by emystar on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 06:33:45 AM AEST
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very good write!
I use to play chess with my youngest brother and he was a genious at it. I could never beat him but later in life I beat others that i played.
Haven't played in such a long time and would
have to play awhile to remember the rules in who plays what etc.
Very good write!
a master peice to any chess man or women.
huggs,
emy |
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