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One Tear
Contributed by
bruised_hands08
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Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 06:09:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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No more trying for me.
I'm giving up and moving on.
There I was for you to see...
Naked, Beaten, and Bruised.
You looked at me... and shed one single tear.
"I'm sorry baby, I won't be here when we die"
And then we died. Fading into existence.
You call my name... I don't respond.
Tired of this game. I'm movin on.
I'm scared to leave, but if I don't...
My life will be hell til I die.
Your hair so fair... your heart so back.
When I am gone, I won't come back.
Please just let me go.
Eight simple rules...
Written in despair.
Your fingers in my hair.
Stop.
Nothing can take when we had away...
but ourselves.
ARE YOU EVEN TRYING?!
Stop.
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bruised_hands08
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2005-01-30 18:09:16]
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Re: One Tear
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by noone on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 06:20:23 PM AEST
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Well done hun, this is really good. Its quite a sad and very emotional poem. I enjoyed reading this, please keep writing,
kirsty xx |
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Re: One Tear
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 06:20:37 PM AEST
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Re: One Tear
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by emystar on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 06:38:45 AM AEST
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Very sad but i can tottally relate.
keep writing.
huggs,
emy |
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