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Just Leave
Contributed by
AngelEmmA
on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 05:55:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Maybe theres a heaven
Maybe theres a hell
theres no silver lining
on a heart thats breaking,
wishing you were dying,
or offering your soul for the taking,
by now you just want to see
my reason
for offering you
such a treason
its all the little things you do
that make me dream
every night
of a love not torn at the seams
and someone to hold onto so tight
now you know
how lonely i must be
so maybe you should go...
yeah...
just leave...
Copyright ©
AngelEmmA
... [
2005-01-30 17:55:41]
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Re: Just Leave
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 06:00:43 PM AEST
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| i dont think its all that crappy. with a little more revision this will be a work of art. |
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Re: Just Leave
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 06:04:17 PM AEST
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| I agree with E9..It could be better of course but no it is not crappy..I can show you about ten that are on board right now that are *****..But yours is not one of them. |
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Re: Just Leave
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by emystar on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 06:45:57 AM AEST
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Very sad but i do understand.
I've benn guilty of being wrong many times.
Hang tuff as joy cometh in the morning.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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