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Sparks fly
Contributed by
Jezabel
on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:07:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Look at you
try to take
my heart
from me
but there's
something
you don't see.
Consider that
fortunate
for me
hiding in the corner.
Sugar sweet
as your lips are
you don't spot
the falling star
you're just blind
to who you are
so go on and mourn her.
I walk down
the boulevard
window shopping
don't look hard
and you throw
at me a shard
i think i should warn her.
don't
think
fast.
Copyright ©
Jezabel
... [
2005-01-30 15:07:40]
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Re: Sparks fly
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by pixie on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:08:33 PM AEST
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ohhh that was very good, I really loved it, great work
pix xx |
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Re: Sparks fly
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by justjonesy on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 05:27:18 PM AEST
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| great job.....loved its flow...."window shopping"...great stuff |
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