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Eyes Without A Face
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 02:07:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Eyes without a face,
Have no home or no safe place,
They hang there suspended,
From reality they have descended.
They are lost & alone in the world,
They are naked & forever unfurled,
Exposed to hurt & endless pain,
Everything to lose, nothing to gain.
They search for a place to hide,
Search the lands so vast & wide,
Failing to find somewhere to get shelter,
Instead they plummet down this unforgiving helter skelter.
They remain cold & needing life,
But only suffering this grief & strife,
Eyes without a face live alone,
Never love or compassion are they shown.
Restlessly they wander,
Through their mind they do ponder,
Do they not deserve comfort & love?
Are they only worthy of a kick or a shove?
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-01-30 14:07:49]
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Re: Eyes Without A Face
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 02:12:09 PM AEST
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| The title caught me (I love the song by the same name!). How well you expressed the lonliness that lots of people feel. Hope this is *not* what you are feeling at this point. Touching write, Pixie! Hugs! |
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Re: Eyes Without A Face
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 02:30:10 PM AEST
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this is so human it hurts... excellent moving piece, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Eyes Without A Face
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 02:57:03 PM AEST
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what can i say about this that the others didn't tell you already.
*wonders for a moment*
This is really something Kriss the whole write was just sad and emotional. I liked it.
Jane x
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Re: Eyes Without A Face
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by subchild on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:41:10 PM AEST
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| This is so great..Your flow and the feeling you have here I simply love. Much peace and love here. |
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Re: Eyes Without A Face
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 04:00:39 PM AEST
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once again u grace these pages with your poetic prowes, welcome back pixie, and ty 4 your ever so
inspiering words of beauty . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Eyes Without A Face
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by sweetoccasion29 on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 04:02:41 PM AEST
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| beautiful write,loved the flow of it. |
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Re: Eyes Without A Face
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by lovesucks on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 05:48:33 PM AEST
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| Awesome!! |
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Re: Eyes Without A Face
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 06:35:58 PM AEST
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Nice poem. I hope you really are not feeling this way.
Spazzo |
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Re: Eyes Without A Face
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by autumngreeneyes on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 11:30:16 PM AEST
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| eyes without a face.. intresting pix.. how did you think of it? say..if you comment on my poetry..do me a favor and leave out the star thingie..the vote? someone is giving me 1(s)..I don't know why..they won't leave a comment or anything..to tell me why they think my poem sucks..but I'm trying to narrow it down..thanks..great to have you back and great write.. |
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Re: Eyes Without A Face
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 01:20:08 AM AEST
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Ladyfawn is right this write really move me.
Welcome back pixie girl.Miss reading your poems.
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