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Slipping Away Again
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:54:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Can't find you
Looking in all the wrong places.
Where can you hide ?
The World you live in Ain't that Big !!
Searched every rotten place
thats all there's left
Where are you
have you ?
Slipped back Into the darkness
Confusion as your company again
Poor soul
which is it
You or him.
Whisper
Copyright ©
Whisper
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2005-01-30 13:54:04]
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Re: Slipping Away Again
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:55:14 PM AEST
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shame you cant stop your thoughts from flooding in *hugs* emotional and sad write,
good poem
love pix xx |
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Re: Slipping Away Again
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by Phantomdream on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:15:20 PM AEST
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| This seems....choppy? Maybe not too choppy, but really, random thoughts? IT's very sweet....but maybe not flowing enough. |
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Re: Slipping Away Again
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by Petznick on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 12:08:45 AM AEST
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| hit home for me a little bit, it really is tough trying to find someone who takes your life to a whole other level, nice one |
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