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Would You be my Valentine
Contributed by
ArmyBrat
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Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:44:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Palms sweating wetter than a stream
My heart is beating louder than a jamboree
I feel my legs weaken I start to shake
thinking to myself what if this is a mistake
I take a deep breath
as I walk to his desk
I hand him the card with a question inside
and all I could do was give a shy smile
but to my surprise he also gave me a card
and inside the card was the same words I wrote
I couldn't answer I had something stuck in my throat
for what he wrote was just fine
it was would you be my valentine
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2005-01-30 13:44:20]
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Re: Would You be my Valentine
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:54:02 PM AEST
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| How cute! Your details are marvelous! Keep up the good work! |
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Re: Would You be my Valentine
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by pixie on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:56:15 PM AEST
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awww that was sweet, good poem
pix xx |
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Re: Would You be my Valentine
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by emystar on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:19:59 PM AEST
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Very beautifull write-n-so sweet.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Would You be my Valentine
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 04:22:19 PM AEST
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| Oh that was so sweet. Great little write. Much peace to you. |
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