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Contained
Contributed by
Quilted_rag_doll
on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 12:53:48 PM in AEST
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I have built myself a prison cell,
out of myself, to contain myself.
The lock is locked, the key thrown,
out of sight, out of mind.
Out of existence, out of reality,
locked between the boundries
of the world, and my own nightmare.
Cold iron bars, a barrier,
seperating me from myself.
Dead eyes, forever gazing,
into the empty blackness,
that is so full of memories.
The steely knives of unreality,
stabbing into me,
dividing my already shattered self.
Contained in this self-created cell,
forever bound within it and myself.
[...contained within...]
Copyright ©
Quilted_rag_doll
... [
2005-01-30 12:53:48]
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Re: Contained
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by pixie on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 12:56:07 PM AEST
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powerful expression, greatly written
pix xx |
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Re: Contained
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by ROUGE on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 12:56:39 PM AEST
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| so very true. great write.....rouge. |
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Re: Contained
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by Jane_Doe on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 12:57:45 PM AEST
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| Great imagery. |
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Re: Contained
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:02:00 PM AEST
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| I can so relate to this! However, I'm starting to dig tunnels under the bars, heh. Great write and nicely expressed! Cheers! |
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Re: Contained
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 02:10:55 PM AEST
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| Good write..Your tone and feel here really worked so well..Keep this up..Just try not to get dust on the throne. |
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