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Damn You
Contributed by
ROUGE
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Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 11:21:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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The burning of curses are upon me.
The reality of it all is what I cant become.
Hiding inside of what I could never seem to avoid.
My fingers are now numb,
I cant hold on any more.
Leave it alone!
Get away from my feet!
I will not go under,
Not like this, never this easy!
I may be a failure;
So stay clear of my life.
Times like these, its wiser to look to the left.
Leave it alone!
Get away from my feet!
I will not go under,
Not like this, never this easy!
I said this once before.
Why do you insist on doing this?
Does it bring you fun,
Or some uncanny bliss?
What is it with you?
Constantly when everyone is around...
Every time I seem to rise,
You keep pulling me down.
DAMN!
Copyright ©
ROUGE
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2005-01-30 11:21:35]
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Re: Damn You
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 11:24:46 AM AEST
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| Well, be who you are anyway is all I can say. This was heartfelt and ticked off. Who knows why people do the things they do? There are no simple black and white answers. It's a good write. Blessings. |
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Re: Damn You
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 11:30:56 AM AEST
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Youch. You can definatly feel the anger behind this. Timebot gave some good advice though, just be who you are.
Other wise, great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Damn You
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by autumngreeneyes on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 11:31:57 AM AEST
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| I kept wondering..what is it with her feet..then at the end I got it..(nobody said I was smart..duh) but great poem..it kept me all the way through..I don't vote any more..if you read me..you'll see why..I'd easily give this 5 stars. |
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Re: Damn You
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by pixie on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 12:01:39 PM AEST
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a very good expressive write,good writing
pixie xx |
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Re: Damn You
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by jjones12 on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 12:14:04 PM AEST
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great write, but sad!Believe in youself!!
=Jen= |
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Re: Damn You
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by shelby on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 04:36:56 PM AEST
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your emotions were expressed well throughout this write its strong and powerful. All the above advice rings true just be yourself and up their boodies if that doesnt work give em a pop that will teach them! (Joke)
Michelle |
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