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A Bloody Battle
Contributed by
noone
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Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 06:08:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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A soldiers cry is very disturbing,
As bloodshed spills onto woken land.
A swift of the axe, a slice of the throat,
White snow turned red.
So many cries of help,screams of pain fading away,
As quiet music suddenly begins to fill the air.
One by one they deterioate
Memories slipping, tears dripping.
The land is still and quiet, not a sound.
Bodies lay motionless.
Noone was there to cheer them on or pick them up,
As they fell with a thud.
Not God, not an angel was there to guide them.
That was how it went where people died for a cause.
But only few lived to tell the horrific tales.
In the end we hope for peace,
Where no blood is spilled,
And everyone is equal to each other.
But some realise that this is only a dream,
When they wake up and wonder why they are back where they started.
They know there will always be a war,
With so many deaths and so much sadness.
One day it will all change,
And on that day our dream will come true.
Copyright ©
noone
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2005-01-30 06:08:30]
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Re: A Bloody Battle
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:51:44 PM AEST
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moving, powerful write, ...unfortunatly some are more *equal* than others; if leaders had to do the battles -more would go to their homes, pity, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: A Bloody Battle
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 05:19:30 PM AEST
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Memories slipping, tears dripping.
i really like that line! overall, a nice write! keep it up! ^_^
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Re: A Bloody Battle
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by shadowed_soul on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:40:47 PM AEST
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Hi Kirsty, i like this poem. Its very detailed and is very well written. A moving piece. Keep up the good work.
Melissa xx
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Re: A Bloody Battle
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 07:09:05 PM AEST
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| I too hope that one day it will all change and our dreams will come trues. Great write. Great imagery about an all too real experience. Good work. |
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