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Theres Nothing Like
Contributed by
data2delete
on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 05:18:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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There's nothing like a heartache,
There's nothing that can make.
My river full of tears,
Just dry up and go away.
There's nothing like a lady,
Who says she'll be with you for life.
There's nothing like her telling you,
That she will be your wife.
There's nothing like her leaving,
There was nothing I could say.
To make her stop and turn around,
No words would make her stay.
But there's everything to live for,
This old heart of mine will mend.
She might not be my wife,
but in my heart she'll be my friend.
Charles Robert Montonya
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Re: Theres Nothing Like
(User Rating: 1 ) by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 05:36:01 AM AEST (User
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this is BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!! ur first stanza is amazing, i love it....i dunno very touching. well done
ur an great poet and i loved reading this |
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Re: Theres Nothing Like
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stitch on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 08:59:59 AM AEST (User
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The struggle of heartache and letting go can be devestating, but your acceptance of what is real is inspiring. Thanks for sharing.
Stitch |
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Re: Theres Nothing Like
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 08:15:43 AM AEST (User
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Wonderful...Really touched me....Beyond words ~~~Michelle~~~ |
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