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writings of a fool
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 05:16:59 AM in AEST
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the writings of a fool
are what you read tonight
writings of one who believed the rain would not leave a cloud in the sky,
purely only a beautiful rainbow,
that everything would be okay,
if only these things had been true
then i would not be here longing; to be with you
i am waiting on a day that lifts my soul,
takes me to that somewhere; i will be whole,
i chose a sweet ride to forever;
not a free ride to never never:
a place uncompensating my losses,
a sunny day; strong as the forces that be,
no more promises and shifts in the winds,
longing the forces that were you and me:)
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Re: writings of a fool
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by shelby on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 06:26:58 AM AEST
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there she is! Nessa Iv missed you tons.Are you ok? Iv missed your beautiful flowing poetry as well my friend .
Hugs
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 08:51:09 AM AEST
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very nice poem says alot, and rightfully so, nice writting . . .
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 09:31:21 AM AEST
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What a beautiful write so sad.
Touched with so much love.
Nice to see you posting again your poems are so beautiful
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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by pixie on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 11:50:14 AM AEST
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awww Nessa *huggies* so nice to read a poem by you again :) I just got back on the site today after my hols, misseed you all sooo much :)
very moving write
pix xx |
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Re: writings of a fool
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by emystar on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:26:27 PM AEST
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Awesome writing, dear friend.
I can relate to this in my own way. i too have missed your writes. This place would never be the same with out u.
I hope things are going better for u friend.
Life do get hard to endure at times.
Hang tuff and keep up the great writing as u can see we all miss u.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: writings of a fool
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:56:01 PM AEST
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Hey Hun....Missed like like hog misses mud!!
Lovely tender bit of writing..
hugs and love always,
Jenni |
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:11:57 PM AEST
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What an incredible sweet lovely write Nessa, i enjoyed it a lot. and the message was supperb great write.
Jane x |
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by noone on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:13:31 PM AEST
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Beautifully written! I really enjoyed reading this. It is a sad poem yet there is also so much emotion there. Hope to see more of you, *hugs*
Kirsty xx |
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Re: writings of a fool
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by autumngreeneyes on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:23:16 PM AEST
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| I am listening to a mournful cello as I read this..so sad and..what can I say. makes me weep..(I can barely read it with my old eyes because of the color..and the tears don't help.. I wish I was dead..I wish I was drunk..I wish I was dead drunk..:-( |
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by Stitch on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 05:25:49 PM AEST
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So much sadness and longing and feeling of loneliness. I'm looking out at a sky gone rose and purple and knowing it will only last a few moments. Aren't the best things like that? We have only the memories to treasure and looking toward more like them...while in between...we cry.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:35:11 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write. I could feel your emotions so clearly. |
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 07:22:59 PM AEST
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Good write, lady Fawny.
--Ghosty |
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:11:40 PM AEST
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Awesome poem. Sounds sad though. I hope you are doing okay.
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 04:22:45 AM AEST
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hey friend,
A great write .
Happy to see u posting again.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: writings of a fool
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 04:33:47 AM AEST
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Perhaps you are a fool, but you're my fool of a mother, and I wouldn't have it any other way, silly :o)
As a poem its beautiful and heart-wrenchingly sad. Insightful, expressive, emotional... and simply masterful. I do love it, my dear fool.
Hugs 'n Love
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 10:56:00 PM AEST
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| brilliant poem nessa. this one definantly deserved more comments. truely splindid poetically and conceptually. |
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Re: writings of a fool
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by Nazmythian on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 04:01:24 AM AEST
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A fool ? No
A dreamer ? Absolutely.
And the world needs more of your kind.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: writings of a fool
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by Archie on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 03:23:29 PM AEST
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| This is good. Your poems always inspire the writer to write. |
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Re: writings of a fool
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:15:32 PM AEST
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| What a powerful conclusion! I just love conclusions, and yours was really a pleasure to read. I have to admit, I was expecting something else when I read that title, and I'm surprised and enjoyed the path you chose to take. I thought you were going to write something along the lines of writing, but you really did a great job in writing the feelings you did here. That's what I get for judging a book by it's cover, eh? :P But anyways, this was yet another great write by you, and you spoke about so much in three stanzas! |
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 03:06:07 PM AEST
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| This was absolutely beautful. So many of us -fools- end up writing. In the end we aren't fools at all, we are artists of our heartfelt dreams. Lovely poem, ladyfawn! |
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Re: writings of a fool
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by SweetRhythm on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 02:21:20 PM AEST
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Awh Nessa, this was beautiful, what a sweet touching write. I had to read it a second time. Love the way the verses ran into eachother.
Very Nice Job, just lovely
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Re: writings of a fool
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by WAE on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 06:11:56 PM AEST
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Hello there,
A touch of despair mixed with hopes... Light and easy...
Critical suggestions - if asked...
Alex |
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Re: writings of a fool
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by myheartsvoice on
Sunday, 22nd April 2007 @ 12:00:31 PM AEST
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Beautiful imagery from a wanting heart. Love is all to ambivelant. Leading the heart on a merry chase that turns out not to be so merry a chase after all. A lovely and sensitive peice.
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Re: writings of a fool
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by colinb on
Monday, 14th July 2014 @ 05:02:24 PM AEST
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| A beautiful write of mixed emotion of sad & hope |
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