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Dominion day, your hate, becomes my death
Contributed by
in2thetwilightzone
on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:18:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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strike me,
fight me,
slash me,
devide me,
seize your blade at instant speed,
thrash it through me,
make me bleed,
into the night storm my dark spirit will desend,
crush me to nothing,
i am helpless to defend,
down to my knees i fall,
but my death hasnt come yet,
you kill me to feed your hate hunger,
i die because i am filled with regret,
i scream aloud,
bellow till i hush,
the air from my lungs disipate,
the blood from the wounds gush,
today is the day,
this night i recieved an impale,
now the blood drips from my lips,
my whispering becomes whimpering and frail,
you take your blade and raise it to the sky burning storms,
thunder crushes,
and suddenly upon me it dawns,
today i die,
empty, defeated and soon to be forgot,
no one will miss me now,
another life gone,
yet nothing important to this world has been lost...
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in2thetwilightzone
... [
2005-01-30 03:18:16]
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Re: Dominion day, your hate, becomes my death
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by chefhmboyrd on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 10:01:18 AM AEST
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I have felt the fiery rage of hate such as this. It can destroy you if you allow it. Yet I pulled myself through, knowing deep in my soul that the hate they were turning on me was lashing out against themselves. I had a clear conscience, and they were inthe wrong.
I love how you captured the burning and the pain of being slain with hate. I hope more people read this and understand. |
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Re: Dominion day, your hate, becomes my death
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 05:21:44 PM AEST
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oooo, ive been there. deffinatelly.
i saw red.
not a good thing though.
well done. |
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