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someone on your mind?

Contributed by ladyfawn on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 02:31:28 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

someone on your mind tonight?
mayhap one who's held you tight,
just one word would make all right
even make your heart alight,

or maybe by first light of day?
thoughts of this one, float your way,
where all pros and cons are weighed
simply put, life is all affray,

how did it come to be as such?
for happiness, you love so much,
when you love someone, sooo...
your whole being longs their touch...

not another will do by your side
all of your soul has been applied,
this same old song is sang worldwide
as sure as waves

bring in the tides...

§* *§
*|*

Copyright Â© ladyfawn ... [ 2005-01-30 02:31:28]
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Re: someone on your mind? (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 02:38:36 AM AEST
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This was a great write. I really enjoyed it. :-) Yay!
~Me~

Re: someone on your mind? (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:17:20 AM AEST
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Wow this is really sweet and touching.
Great write, i enjoyed it a lot.

Jane x

Re: someone on your mind? (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 04:18:12 AM AEST
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lovely write..I don't find it to be true in my case though..the whole song is sung..but there can be no substittutes..:-( alas.. hope you are well.. did I say lovely write? yes..well, it was!

Re: someone on your mind? (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 09:35:37 AM AEST
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A sweet delicate poem.

Wonderful

Love Sweetangelukxxxx

Re: someone on your mind? (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 11:52:13 AM AEST
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that was just lovely, really touching abd sweet

love pix xx

Re: someone on your mind? (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 10:57:12 PM AEST
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The ending was it's strongest point in my opinion - really good analogy.
This was a good solid poem, I definitely can sympathize with
what it says and feels. Nice job.

~waos/kara

Re: someone on your mind? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:37:46 PM AEST
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Incredibly sweet write. I really liked the flow.
:-)

Re: someone on your mind? (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:47:43 PM AEST
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So beautiful and sweet and awesome and delicate poem.

Scott

Re: someone on your mind? (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 10:33:50 PM AEST
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excellent poem nessa. this one deserves more comments than it has.

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by Former_Member on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 04:45:44 AM AEST
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Beautiful and moving. This is simply wonderful my dear, and I don't believe its possible to have wrapped it up anymore smoothly either. An excellent write as always.

Hugs 'n Love
- Becca

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by hellsfallenangel on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 06:46:48 AM AEST
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its very good i liked i. ohand tu for the comment on my poem"i am" well g2g bye

DEMON

Re: someone on your mind? (User Rating: 1 )
by Aquaelius on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 05:34:59 PM AEST
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Amen sister... you have said it all too well. "As sure as waves bring in the tides."
After a loss, no one can fill the void... can't just brush it off. This is a good one.

Aq.

Re: someone on your mind? (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:20:18 PM AEST
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Excellent! Really well done here, I'm absolutely loving your work! Your conclusion really caught me here too, it was so well crafted, the simile was one that I enjoyed to read, and for some reason it really stands out and speaks to me. I guess this whole poem is something that I can relate to, that must be it. You've written about something I've felt dozens of times over, and it's almost bittersweet. What an excellent piece.

Re: someone on your mind? (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 01:19:02 PM AEST
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Wow Nessa....I am really glad I read this! Great expression that I can identify with...The title....*smirk* Oh, you have NO idea!! lol That hits home...Good job.

Scorp.

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by jonteD on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 09:25:20 AM AEST
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Great write

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by Archie on Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 12:28:41 AM AEST
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"where all pros and cons are weighed
simply put, life is all affray,

how did it come to be as such?
for happiness, you love so much,
when you love someone, sooo...
your whole being longs their touch"

I like these lines from this poem the best. This is a great write.

Re: someone on your mind? (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 01:43:48 PM AEST
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just so beautiful it reaches out to be heard so as to interact with the heart of the reader. i love your writting.

((((Nessa))))

Ben

Re: someone on your mind? (User Rating: 1 )
by colinb on Monday, 14th July 2014 @ 05:08:06 PM AEST
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beautiful reaches my heart & soul

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